Second draft of front cover

After looking at my first draft I decided to change to person on my front cover. I decided to do that as in this picture there is a more directer mode of address. After receiving feedback I was told that the yellow starp on the bottom of the page does not look too good, as it makes the mag look rather cheap and more like a gossip magazine rather than a music magazine, if i changed the colour of the strap to go with the other colours of the page and look more musical like. On the other hand however, I was told the the shadow below the font was rather effective as it challenged the conventions of a magazine as my shadow is around an inch lower than the original text where as, most shadows are only a couple of milimetres lower, this may attract potential customers as it may stand out to them.